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[*] posted on 7-17-2007 at 02:02 PM
This Kind Of Love


Iím talking about a crazy kind of love
The kind of love that makes a man plead insanity in a murder case kind of love
You see, Iím talking about a cupid kind of love
Where you actually see cupid kind of love
The kind of love that makes you delivery the flowers yourself kind of love
You donít understand, the talk on the phone all night kind of love
Where you stay up all night and dream away kind of love
The kind of love where you get no kind of sleep kind of love
The kind of love where youíre willing to hold them all night kind of love
Willing to look them in the eyes and melt away all night kind of love
The kind of love where you wish upon a star kind of love
The kind of love where you need no time a-part kind of love
I am talking about the kind of love where you canít even breathe and eat kind of love
The dangerously in love kind of love
The kind of love where you get tattoos of one another names on your arms kind of love
Okay, thatís a stupid kind of love
Iím talking about the willing to steal and kill kind of love
The kind of love thatís unconditional kind of love
The Ripley believe it or not kind of love
The sun rays that shine on everybody around yaíll kind of love
You feeling me unequivocally kind of love
The kind of love that makes other people say damn I wish I had that kind of love
Iím talking about not being able to see yourself with nobody else kind of love
The kind of love where you look them in the eyes and say, you mine for life kind of love
The kind of love where marriage isnít even a question kind of love
Sheís already picked out the wedding dress and the tux is at the dry cleaners already kind of love
Yeah, the kind of love where trust and communication isnít even an issue kind of love
The kind of love where yaíll know what each other is thinking kind of love
You can look at her and know sheís already ready for some action kind of love
The kind of love where sex always reaches a climax kind of love
And she is speaking in tongues during sex kind of love
Yaíll feeling me now, the kind of love where everything is everything kind of love
The kind of love where trapped in a closet would never happen kind of love
Itís like I can go on forever writing about this kind of love
But this type of love only exists when you give your life up for Christ kind of love
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[*] posted on 7-17-2007 at 06:46 PM


hhmmmm......inspired by Saul Williams..........or the other poet that performed a piece called "this type love"....its beautiful...and i like how you used other similies to get the readers attention.....lovely mastermined twist at the end.........again....i love it!!!!!!!

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[*] posted on 7-18-2007 at 07:25 AM


That's funny, I had a friend tell me the same thing about this piece I wrote a year ago but I've never heard of Saul Williams' "This Type Of Love" until I did a google search on it last night. Quite similar I might add but my inspiration comes from God not other poets. I do like his writing though.
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[*] posted on 7-18-2007 at 08:54 AM


That kind of love is found in no other. kitty25
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thumbup.gif posted on 7-18-2007 at 04:04 PM
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good-afternoon Kikunga,


interesting name as i'm guessing u are african?


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Yaíll feeling me now, the kind of love where everything is everything kind of love
The kind of love where trapped in a closet would never happen kind of love
Itís like I can go on forever writing about this kind of love
But this type of love only exists when you give your life up for Christ kind of love
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love comes in many forms, but indeed it still all starts with the heavenly father... his type of love, shall reign for eternity and beyond... do continue to serve him fully, and spread the word through poetry literally...
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[*] posted on 7-19-2007 at 01:40 AM
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hey poet, first off i say welcome a la familia yeah. this read was a treat, verbally said resounded an even more rhythmic flow. felt this cavas was rather unique/ creative in how the message of salvation/ happiness is delivered. one-



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[*] posted on 10-9-2007 at 03:35 PM


Yes...that kind of love, love that kind of love.
I love when I come upon a piece that I've never seen nor read and love immediately, then want to kick myself for never having seen it before, but happy because after reading it...I realize that it was well worth the unknown wait.
Kikunga...I know that you don't need to me tell you how beautiful this piece is. The best type of love "peace" because the kind of love spoken of is pure, for you realize that this kind of love can only exist if we have the right kind of love FIRST for he that counts the most. For he who has shown us "HOW" to love in the first place. If we can't and don't look at the greatest example, then we have never really loved at all. Just a few random words that we let slip out of our mouths with no real meaning at all....
God is love and his Son being the perfect reflection him of him as shown us just how to show it.

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[*] posted on 11-12-2007 at 10:49 AM


Iím just making my rounds of thank you on this piece. I appreciate the love and yes, once you discover that Christ type of love then one can truly understand the significance of not only receiving it but reciprocating that type of love as well. Much love for the comments, Jah bless



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[*] posted on 11-12-2007 at 09:32 PM


Yo man your so talented... YOO MAN I know your not here to see the tears roll out my eyes but they are... love is like air i cant even.. I've never heard a man describe love... I don' think I have ever known that kindah love...That peice was something so damn beautiful, mygod my god I ussually wilmake some comment on a ertain line but tat was beautiful I hope u don't mind but I copied it an have it as a screen saver.... Yo that was beautiful



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[*] posted on 11-13-2007 at 01:55 PM


Lenawashingtonwriter,

Thank you for the love and your continued support, your beautiful words will forever resound in my heart and I pray everyday that you will experience this type of love because when we truly love Christ for his undying love that he submitted unto us on the hills of Golgotha, then we can truly appreciate that type of love that is bounded not only from one soul to another but a universal love that places Jesus as the epicenter of our lives. Again, thanks for being inspired because through your inspired words, I continue to discover myself. Much love and Jah bless

P.S. And yes, you are more than welcome to use it as your screen saverÖ




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[*] posted on 12-2-2007 at 07:41 PM


being the restriction of poetry being permitted here... had another opportunity to read this over & was moved once more. had to take opportunity to add my favorities mano. this will be my second now. one-



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[*] posted on 12-31-2007 at 10:23 AM


I long for this kind of love, where do I find it? Per haps within myself, when I except my faults and begin to put God first and truly have faith and trust in him then that is when i will have This Kind of Love. Keep putting the message out.
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[*] posted on 2-18-2008 at 11:32 PM


I love this kinda love, like you said, you can write about it forever and ever. I really like.

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[*] posted on 2-20-2008 at 01:12 PM


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[*] posted on 6-18-2008 at 10:12 AM


I feel you, man, as unconditional love is the kind of love that we need, not the love where I'll love you as long as it's popular, not the love where I'll love you as long as no one sees it, not the love where we're not givers, etc. One for the masses; I tell you; I'm reading a lot of good stuff today.



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[*] posted on 8-7-2008 at 02:41 PM


VERY POWERFUL WAY OF EXPRESSING YOUR LOVE FOR THE CREATOR. THIS IS GREAT. NEVER READ ONE LIKE THIS BEFORE, BEAUTIFUL WORK. BLESSINGS ALWAYS.



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[*] posted on 8-7-2008 at 03:43 PM


This was beautifully spun - very lyrical in it's movements. I enjoyed the tour de force this is. Could quibble with a few of the ideas - but the way you word it more than makes up for what may in a poem of lesser quality be considered a stumble.

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[*] posted on 2-8-2009 at 01:55 PM
Kind of Love


You feel me. The I don't want nobody else kinda love. The I say be and you say it is kinda love. I want it and you got it kinda love. We be on a tight rope dancing kinda love. Ship out to sea just you and me kinda love. I got you and you got me kinda love. Where is my man oh he making a way for me kinda love. That God is the center and were at one kinda love. That everybody want to be me kinda love. Me and He is all that be kinda love. Whatever it takes kinda love. You aint gotta ask kinda love. My peace, my joy, my strength kinda love. What you want kinda love. I will take you there kinda love. Damn you are really mine kinda love.


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[*] posted on 2-8-2009 at 02:09 PM


Thanks for the extension, done quite well, very deep and passionate kind of love you seek I might add, LOL!. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and Jah bless



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[*] posted on 7-5-2009 at 12:47 PM


wreckless love by Alicia Keys came in my head as I read this but she was speaking about a love between two persons..you're talking about the love of God..

it's wonderful..
it makes you feel good inside
and outside..from head to toe....


this depiction of love is priceless..
and it's real..i finna get me some
of this love right now!!
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[*] posted on 7-7-2009 at 02:42 PM


Yeah, I think Alicia Keys stole my creativity with the piece just like I stole it from Saul Williams, LOL. Hopefully you got some of this love in your life, it only comes by way of the maker, LOL. Thanks for reading and Jah bless



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[*] posted on 7-31-2009 at 04:50 PM


I enjoyed this poem because it shows how awesome Gods love is. Thank you for saying (or writing) what is sometimes hard to put into words.
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[*] posted on 8-7-2009 at 12:11 AM


'You donít understand, the talk on the phone all night kind of love
Where you stay up all night and dream away kind of love
The kind of love where you get no kind of sleep kind of love
The kind of love where youíre willing to hold them all night kind of love'

Yes, God love is like no other: it's all embracing and totally satisfying. Whereas the earth love that has you on the phone for endless hours and dreaming about the subject of your affection for endless more is a finite love and can, more often than not, lead to disappointment.

Enjoyed your art, poet.:saint:
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[*] posted on 4-15-2010 at 10:01 PM


Hello Matadi,

I loved this piece. After enduring so much in my relationship, I was thinking about giving up on love, because that kind of love that your speaking of is so RARE to find in others, my faith continues to grow. I believe the only way this can be achieved if both have a close relationship in GOD.

I loved this sentence.
But this type of love only exists when you give your life up for Christ kind of love.

God Bless
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shocked.gif posted on 6-3-2010 at 07:20 PM
THATS A WHOLE LOT OF LOVING GOING ON


THE STANCE OF THIS POEM DISCRIBES LOVE IN SO MANY DEGREES. IT'S UNCONDITIONAL, CRAZY, EMOTIONALLY, PHYSICALLY, SPIRITUAL, U GOT IT BAD LOVE. I DIE 4 U LOVE. CAN'T SAY I'VE NEVER QUITE FELT THAT WAY B4, BUT LATER CHOSE 2 BE SENSIBLE ABT IT 2. THAT'S THE COMING DOWN EFFECT 4 ME. SECOND TIME AROUND TYPE OF DEAL, W/ LOVE NOT BEING QUITE AS INTENSE BUT THERE IN CONTENTMENT. THIS IS WHY MY "LOVE IS LIKE THE WEATHER" CAME ABT 2 BE SUM TIME AGO. IT'S NICE 2 RECALL THESE FEELINGS AND HOPE 4 THAT FEELN AGAIN SOMEDAY. GOOD TOPIC CHOSE. KEEP THEM GOING! duh
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